Oh man, I worried SO MUCH about the foreshadowing! Especially the "what if I promised you something" dialogue because HI OBVIOUS. I'm glad it worked for you and wasn't just O HAI SLEDGEHAMMER OF FORESHADOWING.
And I really love writing kid-fic (teenagerfic? They're 14 so I dunno if it counts as kidfic) and haven't in a while. :D
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Date: 2012-09-08 03:37 am (UTC)And I really love writing kid-fic (teenagerfic? They're 14 so I dunno if it counts as kidfic) and haven't in a while. :D