I love how you've space-operafied this so much -- especially Hal's insistence that nobody ever see the real him, and then, of course, Hotspur does. Because of course he does. And also, the scars. It's so perfectly them and perfect for the setting!
(Poor Falstaff, though. I have the impression the narrative is on Hal's side here, but I always feel bad for him anyway!)
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Date: 2011-09-04 04:16 pm (UTC)(Poor Falstaff, though. I have the impression the narrative is on Hal's side here, but I always feel bad for him anyway!)