Well done, especially in the use of the second person -- it's not easy, but you make it work really well, showing Henry's attempts to rationalise everything he's doing alongside what's actually happening. Seeing Richard through his eyes is fascinating; he's performative, larger-than-life, and so consciously the king, something Henry can't quite master, even when he's got the crown.
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Date: 2009-08-19 01:08 pm (UTC)