Oh, beautiful! Thank you, mystery author. I've wanted to read an Anne who was this much of a Neville for a very long time, and never quite managed to write it myself (you're right about the text pushing against it in a way that's hard to dismiss in my usual cavalier fashion!)

I love the historical details you've put in: Clarence protesting against Richard and Anne's marriage and so on.

I usually want to see how stories set at the beginning of the play would continue, but I'm not sure I do here because I love this Richard and this Anne and I don't think it would end happily for them. I love the way the story ends, and it feels just right.

(And it's most awfully sexy as well, of course.)