I don't mean a corrective in a stern, rebuking sense--only that this is an update, a fleshing-out, that brings that part of canon more firmly in line with everything that we've developed since. If I'd known two years ago that this AU would still be getting contributions from fabulous writers like you, I think this fic is exactly the thing I would have hoped someone would write. I'm especially grateful that someone as talented, as thoughtful, and as creative as you took on the task.