I wanted to reply to this even though the reveals won't be up till later. This fic was not in any way intended to be a corrective to yours, and I apologise for having given that impression. It was not even close to my intent; any and all references to Reunification (http://the-phrensies.livejournal.com/7028.html) were meant, rather, as a tribute and an homage to a fic I read and loved, not as a critique.