I'm SO GLAD you picked up on that. I've been trying to play around with unreliable narrators (or at least, POV characters) lately, and after your spectacular fic, I realized that Hal is an excellent subject for it. I loved trying to make it clear for the audience what was happening in Hotspur's head, and also to make it clear that Hal just plain doesn't get it--and I'm glad it sort of worked. ^__^
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(Heh. I enjoyed that image.)
Glad you ... can I say enjoyed it? <3