ext_70885 ([identity profile] lareinenoire.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] thisengland2009-08-18 03:52 pm

[FICATHON] Sans peur et sans reproche, for [livejournal.com profile] shayheyred

Title: Sans peur et sans reproche
Author: [livejournal.com profile] lareinenoire
Play: Henry V
Recipient: [livejournal.com profile] shayheyred
Characters/Pairings: Constable of France
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Summary: A disease in the blood, some whispered. A curse on the house of Valois. Perhaps that was what had brought the English, for, surely, the son of a man who had murdered an anointed King should have been struck down long ere this.
Notes: Your proper fic will be up shortly. We just wanted to make sure everybody got something today.



The rain, which had plagued them ever since their departure from Péronne, had finally spent itself, content to spit a few fitful drops every now and again across the camp. Their proud blue banners barely stirred in the sluggish breeze, concealing the golden fleurs-de-lis within its soggy folds. If Charles d'Albret had believed in omens, no doubt he would have crossed himself and muttered a prayer, a firm reminder to God to smile upon their just cause.

But the High Constable of France was not a superstitious man. Nor was he, in these dark watches of the night, altogether sure that their cause was just.

He would fight on the morrow, of course. It was his duty and his pride, never mind that he had advised against pitched battle just days before. Let the English spend themselves in marching. Let hunger and illness take them on the road. It was their land--they could afford to wait. But the Dauphin was determined to meet King Henry in the field, to prove once and for all that the other was no less dissolute than he.

"You are too hard on him, I think." The voice and its unsurprising sentiments belonged to the Dauphin's cousin, Charles d'Orléans, with whom the Constable shared a Christian name, a hatred of the Burgundians, and little else. "He's just a boy."

"The English do not care. They see only his foolishness, think it is only a matter of time before he follows his father." Not for the first time, the Constable wondered what it might be like to serve a king who was not mad, who had not abandoned his kingdom for a world of shadows impenetrable to all but himself. The flashes of lucidity were growing fewer and farther between, and it seemed the entire court watched the Dauphin's every move with dread.

A disease in the blood, some whispered. A curse on the house of Valois. Perhaps that was what had brought the English, for, surely, the son of a man who had murdered an anointed King should have been struck down long ere this.

The Constable sighed. "It does not matter. We shall meet them at sunrise."

"Mountjoy has returned, then?" At the Constable's nod, Orléans shook his head. "Perhaps he too is mad."

"Bold, certainly. Also ambitious and without scruple." A scrap of rumour came to mind then, a story that had flooded the court soon after news arrived of the old king's death. "They say he stole the crown from his dying father's very hands. He hadn't even the decency to wait till the corpse was cold."

"Do you expect any better from the son of an accursed usurper? And now he seeks to steal a throne from another rightful king. Mort-Dieu," spat Orléans, "it cannot be permitted!"

"No, it cannot. And, indeed, it shall not be permitted. I merely regret that it should come to this, that starving men should die in their own filth for the pride of two brainsick boys." The Constable's lip curled in scorn. "There is no honour in such a victory."

"You'll think differently when we've won. You'll see."

He dredged up a smile for Orléans, but the other had already turned away, calling for his squire. Through the distant trees, he could see the first streaks of dawn snaking across the horizon. Whatever the English were, whatever God had in store for both or either side, it was time to meet them.

***


The showers of arrows rained down on their men as the storms had in the days before the battle. Around him, the other commanders were shouting, incoherent cries mingling with the screams of the dying. The Dauphin was all but clinging to the Constable's side, eyes wide as saucers, the armour in which he'd had so much pride dented and bloodstained.

At least, the Constable thought dourly, this suggested the boy wasn't mad.

He heard his own voice cutting across the throng, urging them to follow him into the fray. There would be no earthly victory today, but out of scourges were martyrs made. And the wheel of fortune could not but turn downward for Harry of England after such a day as this.

He had, in the end, offered his King the greatest service that ever chevalier could render. The rest was out of his hands.
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[identity profile] shayheyred.livejournal.com 2009-08-18 08:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Okay, this is splendid and so very worth waiting for. CONSTABLE fic! EXCELLENT Constable fic! You've really made my day.

The Constable is possibly my favorite character in Henry V, as much for what he doesn't say as for his strong character. His spirit remains unconquered, and Sans peur et sans reproche he serves his kingdom. He's a soldier, and a patriot, but not one who follows blindly, and that you have captured magnificently. Thank you for this treat!

[identity profile] theficklepickle.livejournal.com 2009-08-18 08:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Hate to quibble, but the herald's name is 'Montjoy'.

[identity profile] speak-me-fair.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 08:06 am (UTC)(link)
This is such a fantastic little fic! The Constable is so truly admirable, and it's brought out so nicely here just why that holds true - and also why he holds true, why he is genuinely a chevalier. That he recognises it in himself is just an added bonus for the reader.

I enjoyed this moment far too much:

I merely regret that it should come to this, that starving men should die in their own filth for the pride of two brainsick boys.

it's a line that made me sit there going 'I really shouldn't be finding this quite so funny....'

(but I did!)

Just fantastic.

[identity profile] hyarrowen.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 11:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Nice to see a Constable POV - poor man knew his job, he was overruled by aristocratic idiots who didn't.

BTW which source did you use for the French march? I'm using AH Burne, on the grounds that a soldier who'd actually fought over the ground in question would have a better idea about it than the academics, who tend to go a bit vague about it. But I'm always on the lookout for more info.

[identity profile] aris-tgd.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 07:26 am (UTC)(link)
N'aww! Such fantastic tragedy.

At least, the Constable thought dourly, this suggested the boy wasn't mad.

I have such a weakness for the noble resignation of good men in terrible circumstances. This is lovely.
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[identity profile] shayheyred.livejournal.com 2009-08-25 07:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, I want to thank YOU, personally for pinch hitting this wonderful story. Even though my writer bailed, you came through like a trouper. Thanks again.